Do you ever begin to write something lovely
And it comes out so awfully sad
And you think perhaps
That somewhere
In a place you do not even know
There’s a deep abiding sorrow
In need of a loving heart to care…
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ellie894 August 2018
Do you ever begin to write something lovely
And it comes out so awfully sad
And you think perhaps
That somewhere
In a place you do not even know
There’s a deep abiding sorrow
In need of a loving heart to care…
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ellie894 August 2018
You are on fire. On a whole new level. You are no longer writing you are composing.
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You’ve touched me with such lovely thoughts, thank you🎶
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Seriously, these two I read today. Wow. I don’t want to miss a thing. Oh, I just quoted Aerosmith. These two poems are on a different level. You really inspired me to write.
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Aerosmith rocks! Well, then pick up your pen and get busy. I’ll look forward to reading 😊
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Lol. I will
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Beautiful. Rainbow & best friends!
Oh, the writing is heartfelt. 😊🌻
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The clouds moved back and forth sometimes hiding the beauty of it and it seemed the dogs were mesmerized by something in that direction. Heartfelt thanks, suzanne 🌷
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Your site is a feast for the eyes and soul!
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Thank you so very kindly! 🌷
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I like the remote-from-you place where things aren’t so great. Makes me think of Shelley’s “The keen stars were twinkling,” except the far-from-our-world place for him unites music and moonlight and feeling, viz things are peachy. And I think it was Tennyson who would recite to himself, “Far, far away,” and begin to weep (what a sop). How about Sting:
Many miles away, there’s a shadow on the door
Of a cottage on the shore
Of a dark, Scottish lake
Many miles away…
“Synchronicity II,” 1983
So much for history. Great post, Suz.
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Nice history, thank you 😊
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Somewhere over the rainbow🌈 is lovely and sad at the same time ❤
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And any moment the dogs will turn…then extreme busy and silly 😝
…Thank you kindly 😌❤️
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